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OK, I enjoyed this read and I'm glad you stated that chatGPT had it's 'hand' in writing it (although had you not stated that, I'd never assume you didn't write it). Still scary somewhat, but you already and still know where my preferences are and that's about using your voice only. I've tried writing poetry but gave it up; while I had the desire to write it, I ended up being too critical of it and it all sounded pretentious to my eyes. I'm my worst critic as 'they' say. Like any art, I may not be able to do what other artists do, but I know what moves me in a profound way and what repels me as well. Same with poetry......my exhusband wrote poetry and I never liked it as it came off as pretentious, overly flowery, and trying too hard. Yet, a well known artist (my mentor), Bill Gersh, whose art I loved deeply, also wrote poems which I loved to read....as it was raw, honest, and his voice came through loud and clear. I DO understand the desire to clean things up via a "tool" such as chatCPT.....as the original words and concept are still your own. Makes me think about how when I wanted a professional pedestal attached to a piece or some welding done, I hired a professional person to do it for me as it made the art really look more stunning whereas without that important touch, I could've rigged up something myself with the tools I only had and the piece would work but lacked that special oomph that it needed. And I wasn't about to learn how to weld. Touche' Touchon! I'm mildly converted yet not 100% convinced, but you do make some excellent points and I have to pretty much acquiesce to your wisdom here. Thank you. I do wish more people would comment here as I'd love to get others perspective on this subject. I've been enjoying our discussions in this forum.

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