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Elizabeth Roper Marcus's avatar

Cecil, your productivity leaves me gasping! With this particular project of writing the longest sentence (have you checked out Proust?) I'm both enticed and amused, because it's the exact opposite of my own current project, which is to get to the heart of a story in as few words as possible! I'd been doing this on Insta (with its 2200-character limit plus an image) for 5 years and found that the exercise consistently revealed surprising insights and buried memories. Why that is is not a mystery; I understand it from that substack I wrote with Barbara Schildkrout about writing and the brain. We paused that project after a year, feeling overwhelmed, precisely because we do not have your mega-productive capacity! And so I started Tiny Stories From Life, which I'm finding great fun. In any case, I just love the continuous kaleidoscopic-like simile-loops, as your sentence flows on. What a trip! Masterful and fascinating!

Peter ciccariello's avatar

Regarding your work with sentence structure, Fascinating work Cecil. I am reminded of László Krasznahorkai and even Molly Blooms soliloquy in Ulysses.

Cecil Touchon's avatar

Thanks Peter!

Portia's avatar

Well done, Cecil, what a writing feat!

Cecil Touchon's avatar

Thanks Portia!