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Gorgeous work on the sensory layering here. The way you weave the building's physical decay with Kai's emotional archaeology is masterful, especially the moment where the typewriter's rhythm merges with the dripping water and his mother's sewing machine. That collapse of past/present through sound feels spot-on for how memory actuallyworks in lived spaces.

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